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The new school is larger than the old one, so we have enough space to have activities. It is just li钢ke P.E. lessons. And we can have lessons on the playground.
But we have three problems to improve.The first one is about goi360问答ng to school by bus. There are s独粒特广解利供研委个o many people go to school or work by ***.It maybe causes that we may be late for school.
The seco操雷扬永课第食州次时自nd one is about lunch. Although there is a cant念八乎普才een in our school, it is very small.
The third one is about time. There are some students having lunch at home at noon, and they are often very hurried.
There aren't any problems except the three problems above. And the new school is much better than the old one. I love my new school so mush.
Thank you.